Friday, March 14, 2014

Do I practice What I Preach?

(Golden Gate Bridge picture borrowed :) from The San Francisco Tourism Website: http://www.sanfrancisco.travel/ )


So hopefully you have been reading my blog each week on how, what, and why I write but am I any good at practicing what I preach?  Here are the first two chapters of 'The OuterQuaker Affair" so you can judge for yourself!

Chapter One.

Darrin sat on the couch flicking through the 997 satellite channels he had in his fifth floor apartment.  College football on every sport channel and even the Cartoon Network was failing him.  “Piece of junk” he muttered to himself as he flung the remote on the table.  He headed to the kitchen in search of food to cure his boredom. 
            Darrin Scott was twenty-four and employed by a top computer firm as a wizkid.  He had been there for four years and there wasn’t a wire or mainframe he hadn’t ‘Darrinized” as he liked to put it.  Although not married Darrin had plenty of female company flow through his apartment.  Mostly due to his checking balance and his blue BMW convertible than his charm and wit.  His apartment was also most impressive, situated on the fifth floor of the OuterQuaker Tower he overlooked the San Francisco bay.  It added an extra twenty-five minutes to his commute but Darrin didn’t care.
            The refrigerator did not bring great joy to Darrin.  Short of eating Ritz crackers and Champagne he was going to have to order out.  “Pizza, Chinese, Pizza, Chinese” Darrin mumbled as the coin flew through the air.  Tails, Pizza.  Grabbing the phone and returning to the couch he punched AutoDial three into the handset.  The phone remained silent so Darrin hung up to get a dial tone.  Nothing.  “You’ve gotta be kidding me” Darrin tried to get out, however halfway through the sentence two silenced shots sent him spinning to a heap on the floor. 
            Darrin’s body was slumped on the bed and the killer was soon hooked up to Darrin’s laptop.  Darrin had an illegal hobby, which his assailant was going to use for his own gain.  On the laptop was information hacked from various companies and institutions.  He had not been killed for industrial secrets however.  Within seconds using Darrin’s hacking software he had accessed the OuterQuaker Building Company records.  He now had access to the building plan and information on every tenant.

Chapter Two.

            On the sixth floor Sarah Baker was settling in to watch a movie.  She was alone except for her cat, Mongrel.  She was startled when a loud knock sounded from her door.  Guests had to be buzzed up from the lobby and she didn’t have any real friends in the building.  Cautiously she approached the door.  She didn’t see anyone when she looked through the peephole.  Slowly with the chain on the door she opened it.  The elevator pinged to announce its arrival.  Sure that it was a ploy to draw her into the hallway she quickly shut the door. As she turned she saw the window wide open.  Sarah would never leave the window like that; Mongrel had nearly fallen out a month earlier.  She was nervous as she quickly walked to shut the window.  She pressed her back to the wall and slowly scanned the apartment for intruders.  Nothing was out of place and her cat had slept through the whole event.

If this seems it may interest you post in the comments and I will probably post more of the story.  Or check out my Historical Fiction Novella at: http://store.payloadz.com/details/1941573


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